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One week…
Four days…
Three hours…
How long must I wait
To see your words again?

I’ve been waiting so long.
I’ve left messages.
“Where are you?”
“Where did you go?”
But still, no reply.

I’m getting worried now.
It’s been too long
Since I’ve seen your sweet words.
Far too long
For me to not be worried.

It’s Christmas now.
I thought you would come back for Christmas.
I thought you would come
And say those two simple words,
“Merry Christmas!”

Maybe even two other words
I want so much to see.
But who knows what you’ll say
Until you actually say it.
But still, no message from you as of now.

I know you didn’t forget me,
But I feel somewhat left behind. Alone.
I’m just here, waiting for your reply.
I’ll keep waiting until that sweet day.
I’ll wait forever for your return.

Oh, how overjoyed my heart will be
When you finally do return.
I’ll hug you close and tight,
More then ever before,
And be so relieved that you’re ok.

I hope my waiting will pay off soon.
There’s still hope of your return.
But I must admit, I am losing hope.
I’m so worried.
Oh, such is the nature of a young girl.

So here I am.
Waiting for you,
Though I don’t know when you’ll finally be back.
But until then, I’m just here.
Waiting…
©2007-2009 ~MokubaLover
:iconmokubalover:

Author's Comments

(Any one know a better catagory to put this in? o.o)

I really like this piece... ^^

And it's all true... D;


Erm... Merry Christmas? xD

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:icondoorfromheaven:
Awwwwah, wow...
That's crazy
That's how long Scorp has been gone...>.< -sighs-


:glomp:
it's a beautiful poem. ^^

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconyasumeru:
Aw... T^T great piece <3

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Nice bananas.

Well, *Jei-Muffin. MISSION COMPLETE.
:iconmariklover666:
:ohnoes:

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@o@ I watched for 2666.2 seconds... Can you do better??

[link] ~ Don't cheat >o>

Don't believe my second count? Proof is in the pudding!
[link]
:iconmokubalover:
Whoa, it's true...! They've been gone for about the same length of time... That's pretty weird... :sniff:

Thank you! ^^ :glomp:

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Hey Marcus! How was your weekend? Wha'dya do? Here, I bought you some pens for your crazy pocket. I know you love pens, and I happen to love pens too. We should talk about pens someday. Just sit around and talk about pens. Inks, pens, caps, I love 'em.
:iconmokubalover:
</3
Thank you~ <33

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Hey Marcus! How was your weekend? Wha'dya do? Here, I bought you some pens for your crazy pocket. I know you love pens, and I happen to love pens too. We should talk about pens someday. Just sit around and talk about pens. Inks, pens, caps, I love 'em.
:iconmokubalover:
:iconohnoesplz:

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Hey Marcus! How was your weekend? Wha'dya do? Here, I bought you some pens for your crazy pocket. I know you love pens, and I happen to love pens too. We should talk about pens someday. Just sit around and talk about pens. Inks, pens, caps, I love 'em.
:iconelphin-art:
Awww, that's a sweet piece *feels all warm and gooey inside*

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I challenge YOU to an Agni Kai! [link]
:iconnaoot:
Aaawww, you made me cry D:
I like this ;__; I really do! (and somehow I got a picture where Fai is waiting for Kurogane to return XD maybe because I just readed kurofai fic)

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YAMI NO GAY !
:iconyasumeru:
:hug:

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Nice bananas.

Well, *Jei-Muffin. MISSION COMPLETE.

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